10 pts! What do you mull over of my poem in the order of Toronto?
Toronto
Driving over crackling white snow,
Comforted because she's here,
Again guiding me where to be in motion,
Blissful, the intentions sincere.
Here trees stand in the hose down,
My lover, the city that I live in,
Tomorrow again I'll hold her,
Renewing the same where on earth it begins.
Lost very soon through Forest Hill,
Where she knows my moral deeds,
Dundas where my soul stood still,
Smiling at mellow diversity.
Turning through bending roads,
Gazing at stunning stars above,
She asks me to come back home,
Where I'll other have her love.
Answers: I can't be sure if you are discussing Toronto of yesteryears or of today, nonetheless you know your Toronto history!
Here trees stand in the sea: that's where Toronto return with its name from "tkaranto" a Mohawk word designation "trees in the water".
However "atonronton" is a Huron word intent "plenty" or can mean "plenty of people"
Lost immediately through Forest Hill, Where she knows my righteous deeds: Plenty of movers and shakers live in that nouns. Perhaps you are mentioning charitable contributions?
Dundas where my soul stood still, Smiling at musical diversity: Dundas Road was built by Lord Simcoe who needed to establish a military outpost in travel case of war next to America. Now it hosts ethnic cultures along, especially in the Dundas and Spadina nouns. Dundas is also near Kensington Market.
There are remarkably few poems and literacy work done with Toronto contained by the setting, so it's nice to see another one come along. Keep up the good work!
I similar to it very much. It have a little ring of Robert Frost going on for it. It certainly give the sense that you love your city.
it's a pretty good poem.Congrats :)
Very Good!
And although I hold only visit Toronto 5 times, it paints a much nicer and eloquent picture than my 5 disastrous trips!
So you caught the mood of what TO should be!
its great! nice that you can fit everything almost it in a small poem
I love it!
I'll save it short - millions better than what I could ever write and I'm not bad
lovely! nice poem!
simple and precise to be exact.
are u already a poet?
i bet u are!
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